Posted by: janetleigh | May 28, 2008

Haiku 4 U

Stately red poppy
singularly dejected –
discovers new bud!

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Photo by Steve FE

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  1. I like the hopefulness in that poem. :)

  2. living in nor cal i am blessed with the resurgence of our beautiful native poppies every spring.. they are one of my favorites…

  3. sometimes we all feel like the red poppy

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  5. Yes, yes, there it is standing alone /stately red poppy/ in a field of white or undeveloped flowers, so conspicuous, the rugged individual, the pariah/singularly dejected/–yet entirely able to persevere, to promulgate its message, to be proud of its individuality, its uniqueness, as it /discovers new bud!/. Yes, as one of your commentors mentioned, sometimes we all have felt this way, the black sheep in the herd of white, the white tiger in a sea of orange stripes, the Scottish Highlander, hairy and long-horned billeted in a herd of Herefords. So, you the poetess, the poet, the woman, the person, has had this moment of introspection leading to a smile, an epithany, a realization that your very redness is God’s gift. So go forth, kiss the bees and birds, and spread your seed, smear the fields with your vermilion vigor.

    Glenn

  6. It’s a darling!

  7. Hi Janetleigh, hope your having a relaxing weekend.
    This single red poppy, may stand alone,… but….it stands out from everything else beautifully. :-D

  8. Uplifting words. And the image — it’s like a pep talk in visual form. ;) I can’t stop staring and grinning. (It also reminds me of the scenery in the TV series ‘Pushing Daisies’.) Cheers.

  9. nice;

  10. I loved this.

    The words suggest a dejection. The picture, to me, was resplendent with joy. I loved the dichotomy. Maybe it was a reflection of what I am feeling lately — a mixture of pleasure (good riddance to a job that caused me endless grief) and trepedition (being “unemployed” can be a scary place to be). Little wonder then that I feel like that flower – dejected and yet eagerly looking for new buds, new opportunities, new ways of enjoying life.

    Thanks a ton for this vignette, Janet. (Also thanks for your posts at my blog. My blogging has become very irregular lately… might as well not do it than do it irregularly, I feel sometimes. And yet — why restrict myself by these self-made rules. I’ll blog when I feel like. :))

  11. The words fit perfectly with the image, the poppy has such a expectant look.

  12. Strange, I thought I commented on this. oh well, the poppy is my favourite flower, that colour, the flash of it in green fields, beautiful fire flickers, I love this photo and your words.

  13. I was reading some Tole the other day, and he made a statement, that became a haiku:

    Do not quote the Buddha,
    be the Buddha,
    be the enlightened one.

    Pretty heavy stuff about living in the NOW, and only “visiting” the past and the future. I wonder how poetry fits into this maxim?

    Glenn

  14. cool photo and haiku! I like haiku!

    Your banner photo is great and there are lots of other great posts.


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